Got a couple questions for you... how come you went 4:3? Did you shoot this a while ago and edit it over a prolonged period? the only reason I ask is because shooting 4:3 makes it so much harder to create great looking shots.
What sort of stuff did you learn from the process of making it? Anything from that film stand out as a do or don't do for next time?
What kind of feedback would you like? Obviously, this film is a finished product, so there's no need saying "change this", etc. However, the one thing that I would say is worth changing/tweaking is the score. I know it's hard to find affordable production music, but if you find some indie/underground bands that you like, you can quite often approach them directly and ask for the rights. I really felt that the film could have used some more emotive music to it on those key emotional scenes, but for a large part it felt like the one constant looping track.
Also, I'm very wary with feedback, because I'm always aware that this is someone else's story to tell, so the way I envision it may not be the way they're intending to tell the story. You know? But, there are a few things I could point out for you that might be worth playing with on your next production, just to see if they can help communicate the message in a clearer tone.
FYI, here are some documentaries that some colleagues of mine made, and these are very much in the manner that I like to approach doco's. So if you're watching them and thinking "pffft, these are crap", then my feedback may not be of any use to you
https://vimeo.com/31583125
https://vimeo.com/39177524
And this is just a particular fav of mine. Don't know the guy that made it, but it's a simply beautiful piece of work.
https://vimeo.com/8191217
