That's crap.
And if Busty can't average more than 10 PPG at good percentages, I want him gone anyway. Let me know when Busty averages 3 RPG and 3 APG. Meanwhile, you wouldn't mention Barry unless you thought he was good. He was nothing special until he was 28. Busty has no Pop and he does not have Barry's basketball brain. So let him wander until he's 28 then.
Get a new comparison or you're only making him sound worse.
He's a sometimes successful high flying adventure or he's total junk.

Next?