Dwight Howard, The Future of Houston

nbakingmixes · Post #1 » by **nbakingmixes** » Tue Jul 16, 2013 12:17 am

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rpwwB3ErcT0[/youtube]

Hope you guys like it, and welcome to Houston , Dwight!

kinein · Post #2 » by **kinein** » Tue Jul 16, 2013 3:31 am

Not bad, though it was a little disjointed. The storytelling could have been a little better, maybe a ending clip with D12 declaring for the Rockets or a voice-over with someone noting that. Maybe a gratutitous stay D12 banner shot from the staples center. etc

Cool video though!

nbakingmixes · Post #3 » by **nbakingmixes** » Tue Jul 16, 2013 4:13 am

kinein wrote:Not bad, though it was a little disjointed. The storytelling could have been a little better, maybe a ending clip with D12 declaring for the Rockets or a voice-over with someone noting that. Maybe a gratutitous stay D12 banner shot from the staples center. etc

Cool video though!

That's a good idea! I wasn't really sure what I wanted to do with the video, whether to make it for Lakers fans or Rockets fans, so the story got really mixed up. Rookie move on my part, so next time I'll focus it more. Thanks for your opinion.

kinein · Post #4 » by **kinein** » Tue Jul 16, 2013 8:40 am

nbakingmixes wrote:
kinein wrote:Not bad, though it was a little disjointed. The storytelling could have been a little better, maybe a ending clip with D12 declaring for the Rockets or a voice-over with someone noting that. Maybe a gratutitous stay D12 banner shot from the staples center. etc

Cool video though!

That's a good idea! I wasn't really sure what I wanted to do with the video, whether to make it for Lakers fans or Rockets fans, so the story got really mixed up. Rookie move on my part, so next time I'll focus it more. Thanks for your opinion.

NP! I don't have the know how or desire to put the amount of work to make something like you did but I can appreciate your work and I'm glad you accepted my comments as being constructive and helpful.

Ahhhh hahaha I don't think anything you make will be received well by laker fans.. their pretty salty still ~

Keep up the good work and Thank You for sharing your video with us!

nbakingmixes · Post #5 » by **nbakingmixes** » Tue Jul 16, 2013 4:40 pm

kinein wrote:
nbakingmixes wrote:
kinein wrote:Not bad, though it was a little disjointed. The storytelling could have been a little better, maybe a ending clip with D12 declaring for the Rockets or a voice-over with someone noting that. Maybe a gratutitous stay D12 banner shot from the staples center. etc

Cool video though!

That's a good idea! I wasn't really sure what I wanted to do with the video, whether to make it for Lakers fans or Rockets fans, so the story got really mixed up. Rookie move on my part, so next time I'll focus it more. Thanks for your opinion.

NP! I don't have the know how or desire to put the amount of work to make something like you did but I can appreciate your work and I'm glad you accepted my comments as being constructive and helpful.

Ahhhh hahaha I don't think anything you make will be received well by laker fans.. their pretty salty still ~

Keep up the good work and Thank You for sharing your video with us!

Ha, I actually did post this in the Lakers section, and most of them took it pretty well, making fun of him rather than the actual video, but the topic got locked in the end (I thought it was pretty relevant, but oh well

).

Again, thanks for the comments.