[OT][NEW] SHAHROZ - "BEFORE" (best one yet!)

halfHAVOC · Post #1 » by **halfHAVOC** » Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:36 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QDTF5v8PNfc

MUST LISTEN GUYS, PLEASEEEE!

halfHAVOC · Post #2 » by **halfHAVOC** » Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:36 pm

42 views no comments my fellow jersey ppl? =(

mikhailjordan · Post #3 » by **mikhailjordan** » Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:38 pm

Listened to it a few times the first thing that struck me was that the production quality seemed a lot better. I'll comment more later...

halfHAVOC · Post #4 » by **halfHAVOC** » Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:35 am

mikhailjordan wrote:Listened to it a few times the first thing that struck me was that the production quality seemed a lot better. I'll comment more later...

definitely, i added more input this time on how i wanted it to sound and how i wanted the level of my vocals along with the layering and adlibs and all that, i had alot more control here. Thanks can't wait for your further analysis!

SOUP · Post #5 » by **SOUP** » Thu Aug 12, 2010 6:07 am

This was A LOT better than I thought havoc, keep working on your craft, you're definitely no scrub.

It would help if you didn't rap about yourself all the time though.

That beat though.... S-I-C-K.

vincecarter4pres · Post #6 » by **vincecarter4pres** » Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:50 am

You might have made me ready to make a come back, watch your back...

SteveNets15 · Post #7 » by **SteveNets15** » Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:48 pm

halfHAVOC wrote:
mikhailjordan wrote:Listened to it a few times the first thing that struck me was that the production quality seemed a lot better. I'll comment more later...

definitely, i added more input this time on how i wanted it to sound and how i wanted the level of my vocals along with the layering and adlibs and all that, i had alot more control here. Thanks can't wait for your further analysis!

Yea i can def see your getting more comfortable in there.I think you shld do some more double ups on the hook to separate it from the vs better.I like how you took more control with the sound because engineers just try to knock it out asap most of the time.Thats what producers are for,to make sure its perfect so you gotta be your own producer if you don't have one.

halfHAVOC · Post #8 » by **halfHAVOC** » Thu Aug 12, 2010 4:45 pm

stevieboy wrote:
halfHAVOC wrote:
mikhailjordan wrote:Listened to it a few times the first thing that struck me was that the production quality seemed a lot better. I'll comment more later...

definitely, i added more input this time on how i wanted it to sound and how i wanted the level of my vocals along with the layering and adlibs and all that, i had alot more control here. Thanks can't wait for your further analysis!

Yea i can def see your getting more comfortable in there.I think you shld do some more double ups on the hook to separate it from the vs better.I like how you took more control with the sound because engineers just try to knock it out asap most of the time.Thats what producers are for,to make sure its perfect so you gotta be your own producer if you don't have one.

Definitley bro, i had a vision with this song and i told him what to do, where to put these scratch effects how i wanted my vocals to stick out and everything, just used him as a tool basically because thats what he should be doing. Appreciate all the comments and haha vc4pres i can't wait.

Post #9 » by **jerseyjac** » Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:36 am

Hey, there's potential, its never easy starting out, but good for you for trying to make something happen...IMO, your tempo seems slightly ahead of the beat/music in this one...your tempo on the freestyle track matched the beat/music the best out all of them...(I listened to them all)

All I can say is keep thinking outside the box (w/ your writing, be creative), stay away from generic hooks...

halfHAVOC · Post #10 » by **halfHAVOC** » Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:43 am

jerseyjac wrote:Hey, there's potential, its never easy starting out, but good for you for trying to make something happen...IMO, your tempo seems slightly ahead of the beat/music in this one...your tempo on the freestyle track matched the beat/music the best out all of them...(I listened to them all)

All I can say is keep thinking outside the box (w/ your writing, be creative), stay away from generic hooks...

definitely thanks, im gonna start getting a little more creative now that im comfortable with this. I recorded one creative song not sure when im releasing it but stay tuned

Aussie 2point0 · Post #11 » by **Aussie 2point0** » Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:00 pm

Don't mind it. Hey, you should wright a song (rap) about all us. That would be cool

halfHAVOC · Post #12 » by **halfHAVOC** » Fri Aug 13, 2010 3:15 pm

Aussie 2point0 wrote:Don't mind it. Hey, you should wright a song (rap) about all us. That would be cool

or creepy

halfHAVOC · Post #13 » by **halfHAVOC** » Sun Aug 15, 2010 4:05 pm

sorry don't mean to double post but

if you guys are on any other forums, or know and music blogs or websites or anything you could get this song up on, PLEASE do it! or post it up on your facebooks and twitters or whatever! i really need to get more buzz from this and some more hits so when the next song comes out i got more people wanting to listen, word is already starting to spread in areas of New Jersey, lets keep it going!