Manhattan Project wrote:K-DOT wrote:I was a little disappointed with Iron RainSpoiler:My main gripe is that I just really didn't care about Lyria and Ephraim's story that much. Like, it was cool and all, and they did eventually impact the plot as a whole, but I think it could've been done better if instead of them we got the perspective of Pax,
and have it be set 15 years after Morning Star instead of 10. Pax and Electra act like teenagers anyways (I get they're genetically engineered humans, but still it's kind of weird to remember that they're only like 9 and 10 at the time of the book), and it would actually give them something to do. Plus, we could see how Pax views Darrow from his own viewpoint instead of having Darrow tell us what he thinks Pax thinks
I fully expected Darrow to be dead by the end of it, it just seemed like a natural endpoint for him. Like, the first trilogy was his story,
then move on to Lysander's story. If y'all have read the Shattered Sea books, that's something I think they do well, is that the main character of the first book is only the main character for that book, and while he's still around for books 2 and 3, they're told through different characters, which I really liked, and we get to really see how other people see him, something which we got a little of in Lysander's chapters, but that should've been more of the storySpoiler:I didn't mind the Ephraim story line, but I completely agree with you on Lyria, just useless filler IMO. For as important Pax and Electra are to the book and the ending of the book, we never really got much from them. Though I do suspect we will get a ton of chapters about them in the next book, well I hope we do at least. Maybe we see Servo, Victra and Electra in the same scenes in the next book with Pax continuing his mysterious brooding with Mustang.
Darrow dying is the logical finishing line for him, one thing that will be interesting to see is will Lysander have his story or will it be Pax inheriting Darrow's war and continues the fight against Lysander? I've never read the Shattered Sea books, but I've read books like that. The Ex-Heros series does a good job of juggling it's characters.
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I think it's gonna be Lysander's story from here on out, mostly cause we get his viewpoint. Or he could just die horrifically next book, wouldn't rule that one out either
It's almost kind of slipping into GOT season 7, if you watch it, in the sense that people just start not dying instead of it being as ruthless as it used to be. Like, I'm sorry, but Kavax is dead, and there shouldn't be any question about it. The fact that he's still alive (in a coma, but still) kinda takes away from the atmosphere that's been building up the last few books. Like, I genuinely accepted that Sevro was dead in the 3rd book, cause it wouldn't be the first time. And then Cassius being killed offscreen is a huge red flag for me that he's still alive, cause we didn't see a body
I dunno, just feels like there wasn't as much weight behind character's actions any more. Yeah Darrow kills Wulfgar by accident,
but I'm pretty sure he wasn't in the first 3 books, and if he was, I honestly forgot about him, so there's not much weight to it. Same thing with Ephraim's squad getting killed, I just didn't really care about them. Ephraim himself is a fine character, just feels unnecessary
It's almost kind of slipping into GOT season 7, if you watch it, in the sense that people just start not dying instead of it being as ruthless as it used to be. Like, I'm sorry, but Kavax is dead, and there shouldn't be any question about it. The fact that he's still alive (in a coma, but still) kinda takes away from the atmosphere that's been building up the last few books. Like, I genuinely accepted that Sevro was dead in the 3rd book, cause it wouldn't be the first time. And then Cassius being killed offscreen is a huge red flag for me that he's still alive, cause we didn't see a body
I dunno, just feels like there wasn't as much weight behind character's actions any more. Yeah Darrow kills Wulfgar by accident,
but I'm pretty sure he wasn't in the first 3 books, and if he was, I honestly forgot about him, so there's not much weight to it. Same thing with Ephraim's squad getting killed, I just didn't really care about them. Ephraim himself is a fine character, just feels unnecessary




























