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Re: it seems just heard one of her unheard of thing 

Post#1 » by Jarlaxle0204 » Mon Nov 12, 2012 3:06 pm

What did I just read?
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Re: it seems just heard one of her unheard of thing 

Post#2 » by ShawnBronald » Mon Nov 12, 2012 3:08 pm

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Re: it seems just heard one of her unheard of thing 

Post#3 » by snowthedirtbub » Mon Nov 12, 2012 4:44 pm

Character development is lacking
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Re: it seems just heard one of her unheard of thing 

Post#4 » by SunsRback4Good » Mon Nov 12, 2012 5:15 pm

You forgot to indent and need to form paragraphs properly. Overall horrible job and you deserve a D-.
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Re: it seems just heard one of her unheard of thing 

Post#5 » by Revived » Mon Nov 12, 2012 5:32 pm

Does this have something to do with Vets Day?
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