OT: A song I'm on the verge of dropping. This only the verse

[NYK Mentality]

Any type of feedback would be both loved and appreciated. This was just a rough draft, wasn't done in an actual studio and wasn't recorded with a a quality mic. Used a computer headset. Tonight I plan on dropping an intro, the hook and an outro with a Glass House type of A1 quality studio setup. Just wanted some feedback from big city fans. I'm from Queens but raised down here in Saint Petersburg, FL; Hope you A-T-L rap heads can vibe to it. Florida to Georgia, we gotta link up.

http://soundcloud.com/phillyphil85/philly-phil

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