OT: A song I'm on the verge of dropping. This just a verse

[NYK Mentality]

Any type of feedback would be both loved and appreciated. This was just a rough draft, wasn't done in an actual studio and wasn't recorded with a a quality mic. Used a computer headset. Tonight I plan on dropping an intro, the hook and an outro with a Glass House type of A1 quality studio setup. Just wanted some feedback from big city fans. I'm from Queens but raised down here in Saint Petersburg, FL; Hope you L.A rap heads can vibe to it.

http://soundcloud.com/phillyphil85/philly-phil

[RiversideClips]

This has absolutely NO relation to Basketball, why would you promote on this page?
I am not a big fan of people "self promoting" on sights that have nothing in common. If was a basketball rap, I may have listened to it multiple times.