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ICMTM wrote:If I showed you an effective picture that used the pencil filter you'd understand why I'm saying this. I'd show or post the link but It's a nude picture. Maybe I'll pixelate the nude areas and pm you the link?
Color in his skin and use the smudge tool and he won't look so pasty and white. Also blur the BG around him a little so that you get a better depth perception. There are other things I would pick on, but given where you are in the learning process I think I've given you enough to work on.
IMO it looks like you're at about step three of twenty five on this picture. If I'm being too criticle let me know.
ICMTM wrote:If I showed you an effective picture that used the pencil filter you'd understand why I'm saying this. I'd show or post the link but It's a nude picture. Maybe I'll pixelate the nude areas and pm you the link?
Color in his skin and use the smudge tool and he won't look so pasty and white. Also blur the BG around him a little so that you get a better depth perception. There are other things I would pick on, but given where you are in the learning process I think I've given you enough to work on.
IMO it looks like you're at about step three of twenty five on this picture. If I'm being too criticle let me know.