MY College English essay(Has to do with the Nets)

VCdagreat · Post #1 » by **VCdagreat** » Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:24 am

hey guys im in college and as a short assignment my english teacher assigned our class a complaint/protest essay. we had to write a complaint to anythign/anyone that is bothering us with good arguments as to why we are complaining and a solution to that problem, this essay could literally be on anything, so here's what i wrote, word for word, check it out, tell me what you think and let me know wht kind of mark i deserve if you were marking it, here goes:

To Rod Thorn and the New Jersey Nets:

Mr. Thorn my name is xxxxx xxxxxxxxand I am an avid fan of the New Jersey Nets. The team you have run as the president for the past 8 years has some evident problems and all signs of negativity point towards the head coach, Lawrence Frank. Mr. Thorn you have gotten our team to the NBA finals twice in your eight year stay in New Jersey. That is quite a good job Mr. Thorn. We haven

Serpo · Post #2 » by **Serpo** » Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:32 am

What a piece of crap ...

Everybody who sill defends Carter and seriously trys to convince people this Team has the capeability to be more then a 500. team or a bit more ( even with Kidd playing hard )deservers a hard slap in the face.

VCdagreat · Post #3 » by **VCdagreat** » Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:33 am

Serpo wrote:What a piece of crap ...

i see you dig it.

luhbron · Post #4 » by **luhbron** » Tue Mar 11, 2008 5:20 am

what college do you go to?