[OT] [2nd studio joint] Shahroz - Illest Youngin'

halfHAVOC · Post #1 » by **halfHAVOC** » Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:10 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ry_jAxdGh0E

check it out guys, i think my best one!

mikhailjordan · Post #2 » by **mikhailjordan** » Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:43 am

Not too shabby. Production quality could be improved there's some blur / distortion between your vocals and the beat. Also not feeling the electronic piano (especially right at the beginning of the song)... But otherwise wordplay was simple but effective.

There are some rappers nowadays who just put together words and don't make any sense, I'm glad you're not one of them :lol:

halfHAVOC · Post #3 » by **halfHAVOC** » Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:31 am

mikhailjordan wrote:Not too shabby. Production quality could be improved there's some blur / distortion between your vocals and the beat. Also not feeling the electronic piano (especially right at the beginning of the song)... But otherwise wordplay was simple but effective.

There are some rappers nowadays who just put together words and don't make any sense, I'm glad you're not one of them

thanks man appreciate it . To me the most important thing about Rap is the lyrics, i've been writing since i was young but actually turning what i feel and whats in my mind to mesh with a beat is alot tougher than i thought , but im practicing trying to get better!

SteveNets15 · Post #4 » by **SteveNets15** » Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:37 pm

Sounds like you were reading off a paper though i could be wrong.You should ALWAYS no your lyrics off the top of your head namean.I didn't like the 2nd verse you sounded really low and mumbled a lil bit.Try not to move away from the mic when your recording.I can tell your not used to recording in a studio but the more tracks you do the more comfortable you'll get.Over all i hear the talent you just need more practice in the booth.I mean i blame the engineer as well he seems lazy,he has to do a better job of mixing it down and telling you to do the verse over until its perfect.I'm an engineer/producer and theres no way i'd let you leave the studio until its done right because my names on the line to.I charge 35 per hour(2 hour min.) Holla @ me.My studio is right around Passaic/Garfield/Lodi/clifton/ptown area.

PortlandForever · Post #5 » by **PortlandForever** » Fri Jul 30, 2010 1:52 am

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gC-f_HZTp60[/youtube]

halfHAVOC · Post #6 » by **halfHAVOC** » Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:34 pm

stevieboy wrote:Sounds like you were reading off a paper though i could be wrong.You should ALWAYS no your lyrics off the top of your head namean.I didn't like the 2nd verse you sounded really low and mumbled a lil bit.Try not to move away from the mic when your recording.I can tell your not used to recording in a studio but the more tracks you do the more comfortable you'll get.Over all i hear the talent you just need more practice in the booth.I mean i blame the engineer as well he seems lazy,he has to do a better job of mixing it down and telling you to do the verse over until its perfect.I'm an engineer/producer and theres no way i'd let you leave the studio until its done right because my names on the line to.I charge 35 per hour(2 hour min.) Holla @ me.My studio is right around Passaic/Garfield/Lodi/clifton/ptown area.

haha yea im fairly new to this, ill try memorizing all my stuff more when i go in but i usually do a few songs so its tough to memorize em all

mikhailjordan · Post #7 » by **mikhailjordan** » Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:51 pm

PortlandForever wrote:[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gC-f_HZTp60[/youtube]

Oh god... I saw this dude's thread on the Knicks board, this won't end well...

PortlandForever · Post #8 » by **PortlandForever** » Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:35 pm

mikhailjordan wrote:
PortlandForever wrote:[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gC-f_HZTp60[/youtube]

Oh god... I saw this dude's thread on the Knicks board, this won't end well...

Its basketball related as it is the nets owner. I just think its funny he is getting called out. Btw Jersey is my second fav team now that Outlaw is gonna be lighting it up so ill be on this board a lot.