zilby wrote:Reading this was truly worth the hour I burned on it.
Also, a big F U to the immature people who attacked her and ruined it.
But I can't wait for chapter 7 to see if Money Weems can do it.
If anyone has chapter 1 please post here
Yeah I believe chapter 1 started off in the Sam Mitchell days when Bargnani was just terrible. I remmeber some of it;
Chuck Swirsky: Well there ya have it folks, Raptors falling again..
Emma rushes towards the tunnel hopping to catch Andrea before he gets in the locker room. She too late.
Emma listens outside.
Sam Mitchell: Andrea, look at me when im speaking to you *SMACK* *Sam grabs Andrea by the jersey* as long as im here you wont be playing, got that boy??
Emma:*GASPS*
Emma runs away from the lockerroom door ina panic not knowing what to do, she bumps into Brian Colangleo.
BC: Excuse me miss, are you ok, do you know where youre going?
Emma: Brian, Im glad its you, I have something to tell you, its about Andrea...
Emma tells Brian the stroy
Emma: ... so if Sam is stays... Andrea wont develope into the number 1 pick like he should be.
BC: Uhh well.. Emma... thanks for the news but you know uh.. Sam won coach of the year last season, we're still playing 500 basketball... thres no reason too...
Emma gets down on her knees.
BC: Sam needs to go.
moments later...
Defeated Andrea walks out of the locker room.
Emma: Hi, Im Emma, im your biggest fan... uhhh wanna play COD sometime?
Andrea: Uh yaaaa , its good. You got some gel in your hair over there. Here let me get that for you.