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Post#41 » by HumbleBumbleBee » Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:16 pm

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Volcano wrote:Wow..didn't even see this on our board.

Who the hell would want to read this crap? We're being put in the viewpoint of a slut.

How DARE you! She's a nice lady! Image


A n nice lady...that is going to continue writing!
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Post#42 » by Kabookalu » Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:26 pm

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Schadenfreude wrote:Emma sobbed gently, Sonny's sudden departure from her heart stinging her to the core. Suddenly, she felt a gentle pressure on her shoulders...and swiveling, saw Bargnani standing there, a sympathetic and loving look gracing his countenance.


"Baby," Andrea murmured, his eyes staring off into the middle distance and his arms sliding down to her waist, "you're gonna be one rebound I won't let get away."


:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: fkkin epic
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Post#43 » by PippenAintEasy » Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:29 pm

This is the greatest thing I've seen on this forums since that one guy posted pictures of his decked out Phoenix Suns bedroom.

There is a woman playing COD with Sonny Weems. The best part is that for some reason, the whole COD kill sequence is detailed.
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Post#44 » by r3dman21 » Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:25 pm

BVPN wrote:This IS fiction. Bargnani doesn't even like girls.

Edit: I found it funny that she never mentioned how many rebounds he had. :lol:


he is doing pretty well for someone that doesn't like girls. he's dating some model Nawal Ayoub Valderrama. but i danno how some one that looks like bargs can get a girl like that.

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Post#45 » by Eliowns » Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:55 pm

Are you guys on Team Andrea or Team Sonny? :D
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Post#46 » by Mr. Savage » Fri Feb 18, 2011 5:16 pm

apparently she is a cutay...

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Post#47 » by Kal El » Fri Feb 18, 2011 5:50 pm

Kc17 wrote:
nyczlegacy wrote:what the f*ck did i just read

A story filled with love, passion, heartbreak, deception, and the great game of basketball tying it all together.

Simply brilliant.


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Post#48 » by Tim_Hardawayy » Thu Jun 2, 2011 12:14 am

Bumping this because its almost the offseason, and because others have requested to see this great piece of fiction.
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Post#49 » by doctorfunk » Thu Jun 2, 2011 12:21 am

vergogna wrote:don't miss the line

"Baby," Andrea murmured, his eyes staring off into the middle distance and his arms sliding down to her waist, "you're gonna be one rebound I won't let get away."


oh **** :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Post#50 » by PippenAintEasy » Thu Jun 2, 2011 12:25 am

Soooo happy you bumped this.
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Post#51 » by RealRip32 » Thu Jun 2, 2011 12:27 am

too bad the deviantart link doesn't work anymore...would some raps fan provide a new link to read the whole story?
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Post#52 » by cb4_89 » Thu Jun 2, 2011 1:42 am

IT DOESN"T WORK ANYMORE!!!. I want to see this.
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Post#53 » by ipoopinmypants » Thu Jun 2, 2011 1:51 am

Alfred wrote:You guys should just read the thread on the Raptors board. It's pretty much the best thread ever.

Link, please!
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Post#54 » by Optms » Thu Jun 2, 2011 1:53 am

Wow, this has to be one of the gayest things I've ever read.
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Post#55 » by Bucksfans1and2 » Thu Jun 2, 2011 3:05 am

Holy God this is amazing.

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Post#56 » by Beas » Thu Jun 2, 2011 3:20 am

Ummmm what did I just read?
Massimo wrote:There is a saying in German that if somebody wants to rape you off and you can't runaway, simply try to have fun with it. This is exactly what the players have to do. Just enjoy it.
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Post#57 » by darth_federer » Thu Jun 2, 2011 5:14 am

gi4c2om0 wrote:
Alfred wrote:You guys should just read the thread on the Raptors board. It's pretty much the best thread ever.

Link, please!


viewtopic.php?f=32&t=1092775&start=45

The links are gone but some people quoted excerpts.
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Post#58 » by nyczlegacy » Thu Jun 9, 2011 10:17 pm

realgm scared away this potential Pulitzer prize winning writer.. damn u raps
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Post#59 » by Vides990 » Thu Jun 9, 2011 10:42 pm

Everything she wrote.......


Emma studied him on the court. His ball handling was perfect, barely a flaw. He had is jump shots, three pointers, foul shots, fakes, everything on lock. She was jealous of his height, she was tall for a girl, but she wished to be taller. Emma was around five foot eight while she wanted to be around five foot ten. She studied the rest of the team. She loved to watch them play, they were so good at what they did, they had to be they were professional basketball players in the NBA.

Emma was sitting in the same area as players and coaches do. It was the beginning of the warm up. In front of her were the team seats, their towels draped on the backs of the chairs. Beside her sat Reggie Evans. He recently injured his right foot and was unable to play. He kept her pretty good company. He was a very happy guy, always smiling and joking around. When he was in game mode, it was on, he was the best rebounder on the team, he was not just a great player, he was a great team player, his passes were amazing  and he was great at setting up his team-mates for a basket.

The game was starting in a few minutes.
"A seven foot tall centre forward, from Italia, numero sette, Andrea Bargnani!" said the announcer
Emma stood up yelling and cheering for him.
"Man, you two," Reggie said to her laughing.
"What?" she asked laughing also.
"You two are just, I don't even really know, it's just good, you know?"
"Yeah, I know," She said smiling.


Toronto lost a close game to Orlando, the final score being 101-107. Emma was kind of sad, but proud of the team, they all played well. She followed Reggie and the rest of the team to the locker-room. She never went inside, she felt it was invasive and figured they wanted their privacy, so she waited outside.

"Hey, have you seen Emma?" Andrea asked Reggie.
"Yeah, she's waiting outside."

Emma heard the locker-room door open and when it did, a shirtless Bargnani appeared. She couldn't help it, he was in shape, but she knew that already.

"Hey, good game," she said with a slight smile on her face.
"Thanks," he replied with a small smile "Do you want to go get something to eat?"
"Yeah, that'd be great."

He went back inside the locker-room and she waited patiently outside for him. He didn't take long, usually he would get delayed by reporters to talk about the game, but luckily this time he wasn't. Reggie hobbled toward her on his crutches, which were as tall if not taller than her.


"You waiting for Andrea?" he asked.
"Yeah, then we're going to go get something to eat, I'm starving."
"You gonna get a salad?" he asked almost in a taunting voice, he knew she never would buy a salad.
"Oh yeah, for sure," she replied in a sarcastic tone "Actually, I think I want some steak, that sounds good or Chinese food, I don't know, we'll figure it out." She heard Reggie laugh at her comment, a typical girl would eat a salad, but not Emma. Then Andrea came out of the locker-room, ready to go.
"Bye Reggie," Emma said as she walked down the hall with Andrea.
"See you tomorrow love birds!" he yelled to them.
Emma looked back at Reggie sarcastically and yelled "Yeah right!" he just waved at her with a huge grin on his face.

They walked down the hall, Emma looked up at him. He was so tall, her head just reached armpit level.

"So, what do you want to eat?" he asked.
"Hmm, Chinese? Is that alright?"
"Yeah, sure."
"Ok, do you want to just pick it up and go back to your place then?" she asked.
"Yeah, that sounds good." he replied smiling at her.

They picked up some Chinese food and went to Andrea's. Emma had only been there a couple times before. He opened the door for her, the walls were neutral with accenting furniture. They put the Chinese food of the counter and separated it. Emma grabbed some food and sat down on the couch, which was quite comfortable. Andrea came and sat beside her.

"So, you guys have practice tomorrow and a game on Wednesday?"
"Yeah, you coming? You don't have to come to the practice if you don't want to"
"Maybe, I'm coming to the game for sure, but I might go out tomorrow"
"You should go out, have some fun instead of sitting at the practice"
"Yeah, I'll go out and take some pictures and shop around and stuff" she said smiling.

Emma loved photography, she always had her camera on her and was constantly taking pictures. She always found some of the weirdest things to photograph, though they usually turned out pretty good. Just recently she had invested in a new camera and it was fantastic so far.

They put away the food and did the dishes, by that time Emma was fairly tired. She flopped down on the couch yawning, it was already nine o'clock, no wonder she was tired.

Emma woke up the next morning on the couch. She couldn't believe she had fallen asleep in Takers, one of her favourite movies and considering how much action there was she was doubly shocked. She got off the couch and put away the food and papers that were laying around and went for a shower. When she got out of the shower she put on some music and made waffles for breakfast. Emma glanced up at the clock to see that it was nearly noon. Suddenly her phone vibrated on the counter beside her. There was a text from Andrea.

"Hey, I'm heading to the game now, see you soon."
"Okay, see you then," she texted him back.

Emma went and got dressed, though she had no idea what she was going to wear other than a pair of jeans. She decided on a white v-neck t-shirt and a pair of black ankle style boots. She grabbed her coat and headed down to the Air Canada Centre. Emma walked into the building towards the locker room area. She heard some footsteps behind her and turned around to see Sonny.

"Hey, you excited for the game?" he asked her.
"Hell yeah, always am!"  she replied smiling.

They continued walking, then Emma stopped a little short of the locker room. Sonny gestured her to go inside, she was excited to finally see what it looked like. She had a general idea from seeing the footage on TV what it looked like, but being there in person would be so much better. Emma looked around, consuming every detail in there. The carpet was black along with the cupboards. It smelt really clean inside for a locker room. The door opened suddenly, startling Emma. She turned around and looked up at Bargnani and smiled. She almost felt like she had butterflies in her stomach.

"H-Hey," she sort of stuttered out. Then the rest of the guys burst in before he could say anything back.

"Hey, Emma, how's it going?" asked Amir.
"Good, good, you?"
"Great!" he replied.
She looked up at Andrea, "I'm going to head out to the court," she said. Emma walked out and sat down. She looked around the massive stadium, there were already a couple people there ready for the game. She was always excited for their games, but she seemed more excited for this one. Emma sat patiently waiting for the warm-up to start. She looked over and saw Reggie walking towards her on his crutches. Since his injury they had become pretty good friends. They talked at practices and sat together at the games, he was like the older brother Emma never had.

The game was going to start in a few minutes. The guys grabbed some water on the bench and Emma wished the team good luck. The announcer called out the starters for the game which were, Andrea, Jose, DeMar, Amir and Sonny.

The buzzer went and the first half was over. Emma and the team headed to the dressing room. She was in the middle of the group of sweaty tall guys crammed in the hall and surprisingly, it didn't smell that bad, in her opinion anyways. She waited outside the locker room knowing that Triano didn't want her inside. The last thing the team needed was to have a distraction when they were talking about the game. The door opened minutes later and the guys started to file out. Sonny walked out and bumped fists with Emma along with Amir and DeMar. Andrea was one of the last guys to come out. He made eye contact with her and kept walking. Emma could kind of tell some thing was messing with his game.

"Hey, Andrea," He turned around in mid-walk, she walked up to him, "Good luck," she said while on her tip-toes and gave him a kiss on the cheek. Then she walked out to the stadium and sat back beside Reggie.
So far Andrea had the most points on the team which was fifteen. Emma knew he could get way more than that and hoped he would, not only for the fans, but for himself and the team.

The Raptors were behind 25 points. The third quarter started and the whole team started to pick up their game. With only a couple minutes left in the third, Andrea now had 26 points and Dallas only had a ten point lead. In the middle of the fourth quarter it was tied. Sonny got a three and Jose got two foul shots bringing them five points ahead. DeMar got two foul shots, giving them a seven point lead. All they had to do is hold them off until the end of the game. The last two minutes of the game was the most intense two minutes Emma had watched. They were catching up, but the Raptors kept getting more baskets too. The final buzzer went and Emma jumped up with excitement. They had come back from a 25 point gap and won it. Reggie and Emma followed the guys and as usual, Emma waited outside the locker room for everyone. DeMar was being interviewed on the court about the game and was the last one back.

"Hey, we're having a little get together, celebration thing after, you coming?" he asked.
"Yeah, for sure, where is it?"
"It's at my place, we're having a showdown on Call of Duty,"
"Nice! I'm there, oh, tell Andrea I'm going home and I'll meet up at your place, okay?"
"Aight, see ya."

Emma went home to change out of her jeans and put some sweats on. She grabbed some food and headed over to DeMar's place. Before she even knocked on the door DeMar was there answering it.

"Hey, brought some food," she sad handing him three paper bags.
"Come on in, everyone's in the living room."
She looked to see a huge TV and Amir and Sonny facing off in team death match.
"Who's who?" she asked.
"Amir is top, Sonny is bottom," answered Andre as she sat down beside him on the couch.
"Good game," she said smiling at him, he smiled back. In his mind he knew that she helped him get his head in the game and he was glad for it. Not to mention the kiss, that was nice too.
"Alright," Emma piped up "Sonny, you and me team death match."

There was one minute left and Emma and Sonny both had six kills. Emma was hiding up on a balcony hoping Sonny would walk by below so she could snipe him. She felt like he was going to pop up out of no where and shoot her in the back so she turned around and through the little window she saw him in the room attached to the balcony. She tried to shoot him, but she ran out of ammo. He walked onto the balcony, Emma ran up and knifed him. A bunch of "Oh's" filled the room, she just laughed to herself.
"Good match," she said and bumped fists with Sonny.
"We'll have to verse again sometime," Sonny said smiling.
Emma went into the kitchen to get some food. She was looking in the fridge for a drink, then heard someone enter the kitchen, it was Andrea. She walked over to him and leaned on the island.

"Thank you," he said. She knew what he was thanking her for. One of the biggest things about being a professional athlete is your mental game.
"You're welcome," she replied smiling and taking a drink.
Hours passed quickly playing Call of Duty. Emma checked the time and it was near one in the morning.
"Crap, I gotta go guys, I'll see ya tomorrow or something," she said getting up. Andrea followed her to the door.
"I'll see you tomorrow?" she asked Andrea as she put her jacket on. He leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.
"At some point, yes," he replied smiling.
Emma walked out and closed the door with a huge smile on her face. All that filled her mind was the fact the Andrea just kissed her.
"I should probably go" Emma said standing up and stretching.
Andrea came and gave her a hug.
"Bye" he said smiling, she smiled back and waved as she closed the door.

The next day, Emma went out shopping and taking pictures, while Andrea went to practice with the team.

"Hey Andrea, how was your night man?" DeMar asked.
"It was good, you?"
"Playin' Call of Duty all night!" He replied as he bumped fists with Amir.
"So Emma Came over, huh?" added Amir
"Yeah man, what'd you guys do?" asked Sonny.
"We ate supper at my place and then she went home" Andrea replied vaguely hoping they wouldn't ask for details. He got lucky and they didn't ask and continued on with practice.

When Emma got home it was around four o'clock. She put the new stuff she bought away and flopped on the couch with her laptop and camera and downloaded the pictures she took that day. All of them turned out pretty good. Then her phone rang.
"Hello?"
"Hey, how was your day?" asked Andrea.
"It was great, I got a few new things and a bunch of my pictures turned out really good. How's practice?"
"Good, the guys of course were asking questions about last night, but it was fine"
"I knew they would," she replied laughing a little "What'd you tell them?"
"I just said you came over for dinner and then went home."

Emma didn't really know what to reply to that, as close as she was to Andrea, she didn't feel like talking on the phone. She just wanted to sit on the couch listening to music and being on the computer all night. Really she just needed a break to update some things and edit some of her photos and catch up on a few things with friends.

"I need to go have a shower," Emma made up something quick to get off the phone "I'll see you at the game tomorrow."
"Okay, see you tomorrow," He said and they hung up.

Emma felt kind of bad for lying and leaving so suddenly, but it was better that way than to drag it on, plus there wasn't much to talk about anyways. Emma cut up some vegetables for a snack and put in one of her favourite movies, Takers.

Emma got home at nearly two in the morning from DeMar's house. She grabbed some food from the kitchen, sat down on the couch and put the basketball game on from earlier. Her phone vibrated in her pocket, startling her. A text from Sonny appeared on the screen. An hour or so later, Hannah opened the door, Emma not even noticing.

"Hey fool" she said.
"Huh, oh hey, your back," she said while yawning.
"Yeah."
"How was Jay's wedding?"
"It was pretty boring," Hannah answered.
"Awesome," Emma said not really paying attention to their conversation.
"Well, I'm going to bed, that was a long-ass flight."
"Yeah. I probably should too," Emma said not moving from the couch. A couple minutes later she finally moved to her room. She put her phone on the table beside her bed.
Hannah could hear Emma's phone vibrate on the table nearly every ten seconds and wondered who she could possible be texting at 3:30 in the morning.

Hannah and Emma had been friends since seventh grade. They went to their first Raptors game together for Emma's sixteenth birthday and tried to make as many as they could since then. They were living in Toronto for school, it wasn't there favourite place, but they had gotten used to it and it wasn't as bad as it was when they first got there.

They woke up unfortunately early the next morning. Hannah and Emma couldn't really sleep in because the team had a game that afternoon and they were not going to be late for it. They had some breakfast and got ready and headed down to the ACC. They got there earlier than usual just because they didn't really have anything else to do. They walked down the halls to the court. It was so quiet, the only noise was the slight patter of their foot steps. When they got closer they heard the voices of the team. They turned the corner and saw Amir, DeMar and Sonny.

"Hey guys," Emma said as she looked at Sonny "You all have met Hannah, right? She was out of town for her bro's wedding, but she is now back. Clearly."
"Yeah, man. Have fun at the wedding?" DeMar asked.
"Uh, no. It was pretty boring," Hannah replied laughing. DeMar laughed at her comment. They walked out to the court where most of the team was just stretching and shooting around a little bit. Emma sat down at the edge of the court on one of the chairs while Hannah was talking with some of the guys and shooting around. Sonny came and sat beside her, both leaning on the back of the chairs with their arm.

"So, how's it going?" he asked
"Pretty good, kind of tired," she smiled "but other then that, it's all good."
"What could you possibly be tired from?" he said sarcastically.
"I don't really know?" Emma replied, also being sarcastic. They sat there unsure of what to say. Emma looked up making eye contact with Sonny. It made her kind of nervous, but excited, she let out a small smile. They both looked over to the court and saw Andrea looking in their direction, but they weren't sure if he was looking at them. Then he looked away. Sonny got up and started to warm-up.

It was the same starting line-up as usual. Emma and Hannah sat intently watching the game. Unfortunately there were many ridiculous calls made on Toronto which did not help them at all. Their shooting was fairly good and they were playing good defence, but all the fouls caused them to lose in the end with a score of 99-103. The point gap wasn't too bad, but they knew they could have won it.
Emma sat in the stadium until almost everyone was gone. She liked the sound of know one else being in there. She heard footsteps coming towards her and looked up at Andrea.

"You played good today," she told him. He just looked at her with a half smile, he felt like he could have done better in some areas. They walked out of the stadium together. Emma looked around for Hannah, she was outside the dressing room waiting for her. They said bye to the guys and headed home.

A month had passed and it was the beginning of January. Reggie still couldn't play because of his foot and Sonny had injured his back. They had a game that evening and Emma was at home getting ready and figuring out what she was going to wear to the annual Raptors Red Party which was later that night. She laid out her outfit for the Red Party and then drove to the game, she was running late which wasn't really like her. She speed-walked down the long hallway and saw Andrea. He looked at her, she smiled and headed into the stadium. All the guys were out there shooting around. She saw Sonny wearing a nice navy blue suit for the game. The only thought in her head was "Damn, he looks good!" as she sat down beside him. The game started with a little different starting line-up consisting of Andrea, Amir, Jerryd, DeMar and Julian.

It was a good game. Very fun to watch, there was no sloppy mistakes and many of the their shots were going in. In the fourth quarter the score was 87-78 for Toronto and they were hoping to keep the lead.
The buzzer went and Toronto had won the game. The final score was 107-92. Emma was excited because they needed this win for that little extra confidence booster. Her phone vibrated in her pocket. There was a text from Hannah.

"How was the game?"
"Good, they won. I'll be back soon, see ya," she replied as she left the stadium and drove home.  She walked inside and Hannah was in the living room.
"Hey, I'm going for a shower now," she said to Emma.
"Aight, I need to have one after."
Emma went into her room and looked at what she was wearing to the Red Party. She wasn't big on dressing up, but occasionally she didn't mind. It also helped if someone she liked was going to be there to see her. As soon as Hannah was done in the shower, Emma went for one. When she got out and was in her room, she checked her phone and there was a text from Sonny.
"Hey, I'll pick you up at 8."
"Okay, see you then," she texted him back. She wondered why he was picking her up instead of Andrea.
"Hey, yo, Hannah, how you getting to the party?" she yelled from her room.
"Uh.. Andrea's picking me up," she replied sounding slightly hesitant.
"Oh, okay," she said still confused about the whole situation.
Emma picked up her dress. It had one shoulder strap and came a couple inches above the knee. She put on the red dress and looked at herself in the mirror. It flowed in all the right places and it made her legs look very long, longer than they already were and when she put on the black heels, she looked even taller. She put her hair in a messy-style bun with curly pieces hanging out on the sides by her temples and a little at the back. She walked out to the living room and saw Hannah. She was wearing a knee length dress with ruffled, almost wrinkly fabric and details of lace at the bottom. The colour was almost a cinnamon-cream and her hair was in a curled-messy up do.

"You look great," Hannah said.
"Yeah, you too. Can't wait to get there and see how the guys look," she replied smiling.
Emma went to grab her coat from her room and heard a knock on the door. She walked out to the living room and answered the door. Andrea stood in front of her. They made eye contact for a few seconds, she smiled.

"You look beautiful," he told her as he scanned her up and down.
"Thank you, you look good too," she replied with a smile. Then Hannah walked in and put her coat on and they headed out the door.
"See you guys there," Emma said. She went to the kitchen to grab a drink. A couple minutes later there was a knock on the door. She opened it to see Sonny in suit. He was wearing black dress pants a red shirt and black vest and tie.

"Wow, you look amazing," he said looking at her from head to toe smiling.
'Daaamn,' he thought 'she looks so good in that dress.'
"Thanks, you too," she replied with a smile and her face turning slightly pink.
"You ready?" he asked.
"Yes," she said as she put on her coat.
They walked out to his car. Emma looked at it wide eyed. It was a Dodge Charger. Her favourite car.
"Nice car," she said with a smile and a small laugh.
"Thanks," he said opening the door for her.
They arrived and went inside. Emma took off her coat and they walked to find their table.

As Emma got closer to the table she saw Andrea and Hannah sitting there already.
"Hey guys," she said as draped her coat on the back of her chair. She looked at Andrea, but just as quickly looked away. Before they could sit down, DeMar was walking towards them with Ed.
"Hey, wow, you guys look great, nice and put together," DeMar said bumping fists with Sonny.
"Yeah, you too," Emma replied "Hey Ed, how's it going?"
"It's good, you look nice by the way."
"Oh, thanks, you too," she said smiling.
'Man is my jaw gonna be tired from smiling all night,' Emma thought to herself.
Emma and Sonny walked around finding all the guys, saying hi and doing the "you look great" bit, not that it was a lie, everyone looked nice and put together, it was just tiring after a while, especially the smiling. Emma and Sonny sat down at an empty table.

"My face is gonna hurt by the end of the night from all this smiling," she told him. He laughed at her comment, which made her smile.
"You're just adding to it, common now!"
"You want a drink, or something?" he asked her.
"Sure."
He got up and headed to the bar to grab some drinks for them. As Emma sat there waiting, she saw Andrea walk by. She looked up at him from her chair. They made eye contact for a couple seconds, Emma slipped a small smile, so did Andrea and then he kept walking. She had too many thoughts running around in her head, a drink right now would do her good. Soon enough Sonny was back with the drinks. Emma took a sip from her glass.

"This is pretty nice so far," she said.
"Yeah, it is," he replied.

A few drinks later Emma got up to go to the bathroom. She walked in and saw Hannah fixing her hair.

"Hey, how's it going?" she asked her.
"Pretty good, how's it with you and Sonny?"
"It's good, yeah."
"That's good," Hannah said. They just kind of stood there, then Emma left and went back to where her and Sonny were sitting.
He saw her walking towards the table. Emma's red dress wasn't that flowing, but it was enough to move around when she walked. Her heels clicked on every step she took and as she got closer she smiled at him as he looked at her.

"You look so good, just, amazing," he told her.
"Thanks," she replied slightly blushing again, but the darker lit room hid that from him.
"You wanna dance?" he asked.
"No thanks, I'm not much of a dancer," she replied feeling kind of bad.
"Okay, that's aight, you don't have to, but I'm gonna go dance, cool?"
"Yeah, go ahead, I should go see where Hannah is anyways."
Sonny got up and headed to the dance floor. Emma sat there for a while, alone wondering what to do. She got up with her drink and walked up to the balcony. She leaned against the railing with her drink in her hand, taking a sip every once and a while. So far she was having a great time. She still wondered why Andrea took Hannah instead of her, but she brushed it off and decided not to think about it. She heard some footsteps behind her. Turning around, she was surprised to see Andrea. He walked up to her at the edge of the balcony.

"Hey," she said with a smile.
"Are you enjoying this?" he asked her.
"Yeah, it's really nice. You look great, everyone looks great."
Emma put her glass down on the near table.
"You having fun with Hannah?" she asked  with a little hint of bitterness.
"Yeah."
"Good, I'm glad," she said sounding happy for him, but deep down, she was sad and jealous.
She felt him grab her hand and lace his fingers with hers. She looked up at him and smiled. Emma's thoughts were running a million miles an hour. He looked her in the eyes and she looked back. The way he stared almost looked like he was apologizing. He leaned down and kissed her on the cheek, their hands slowly parted and he walked back down the stairs. Emma leaned on the railing again. Suddenly she felt a hand touch her back, it startled her. She looked beside her and saw Sonny leaning on the railing.

"Come to get some fresh air?" asked Emma.
"Nah, came to get some of you," Sonny said jokingly but highly seductive. Both of them laughed. Then he stopped laughing, so did Emma.
"Hey you and Andrea aren't together at all are you?" Sonny asked.
Emma didn't think, the word just slipped out. "No." The allure of Sonny making it easier to deny.
He leaned in a little more. Emma knew what was about to happen, she wanted it. Sonny leaned down placing his lips on hers. His arms wrapping around her waist. She tried not to smile against his lips, but couldn't help it. Her arms locked around his neck. He pushed his lips harder into hers, deepening the kiss. He moved his hand up her back. It gave her chills, but she enjoyed it. He placed his hand on her face as they parted. She looked him in the eyes and smiled. Before that moment, she didn't know how bad she wanted that.

DeMar walked past the doorway of the balcony to see Emma and Sonny. Sonny leaned in closer, DeMar could tell what he was doing. Emma and Sonny began to kiss.
'Nice one Sonny,' DeMar thought smirking. He knew Sonny, he could get a girl to do many things after talking her up for a bit. Considering it was Emma, he had done good. She wasn't a floozy and sure didn't put up with bull. She was independent and could be brutally honest.

Emma ran her hands down Sonny's chest. His heart thudding under her palms. She stood on her tip-toes, becoming eye level with him. She was glad he wasn't so tall that she couldn't reach. She thought of Andrea. Where he had kissed her on the cheek seemed to burn. She pulled away from Sonny. He looked at her curiously.

"I, uh, have to go to the bathroom," She said.
"Sure," He replied with a grin.

Emma walked down the stairs. As soon as she was out of sight she took off her heels and ran to the bathroom. She dropped her shoes on the tile floor. She sat on the closed toilet and closed the stall door. A couple minutes later she heard the door open.

"Emma?"

She looked through the crack of door and the frame. She saw Hannah and wiped her eyes of the tears.

"I'm here," she said opening the door of the stall.

Hannah kneeled down in front of her.

"What's the matter?" she asked. "Is it about Andrea?"

Emma nodded.

"Tell me what happened."
"I kissed Sonny," she said. "Or he kissed me, but either way."
"Ahh. And now you feel bad?"
"Yeah. And it's not like me and Andrea were officially going out but still. And Sonny asked me first and everything!" Emma said.
"I get it. Was it good at least?" Hannah said trying to lighten the mood.
"Shut up," Emma said laughing. "And yes it was." She wiped her eyes, a small smile on her lips.
"Thanks bro. Don't tell Andrea, okay?"
"Course." Hannah assured her with a quick nod.

Hannah walked out of the bathroom and went back to her table.

DeMar walked down the stairs to go find Hannah. He saw her walk out of the bathroom and walk over to their table and sit down.

"What's up?" she asked cautiously.
"Just saw Sonny and Emma getting it on." He said with a mischievous smile.
'Ah damn.' she thought, wishing he hadn't seen them.
"Oh really?" she asked. "Maybe, you should stay quiet about it, y'know?"
"Yeah, sure thing." He replied sounding slightly drunk.

Emma walked out of the bathroom fixing the side of her dress. She gazed across the room and saw DeMar. She looked at him and he winked at her. Emma kept walking towards Hannah at her table and DeMar walked away.

"He knows?!" Emma asked with a hint of irritation in her voice.
"Yeah."
"How?"
"Well, he kinda saw you guys." Hannah answered.
"****."
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