superchimp wrote:I really like the look everything except for the possibility the unfortunate mojo of House Stark might combine with our historically bad mojo to make things even worse.
My only real criticism, as a graphic designer, is minor and to do with the letterforms in "Huskies". I would clean up the curves slightly. I know what you are going for and I like the style of the lettering, I'd just simplify the paths and remove the ragged points and have smoother changes in stroke thickness. I like contrast in stroke thickness, it should just flow more naturally.
The design is very clean and those minor inconsistencies conflict with that.
Other than that, full speed ahead!
Oh yeah to the trained eye that script is sloppy as hell. It is simply hand-drawn, scanned and coloured in Photoshop, it's a sketch. I'm hoping a full re-draw in Illustrator and several hours tweaking should give me something a lot more balanced and polished.